Thought I would share some of the fabulous writing that my writing group produced today.
I was ready to run. Mrs Barber clapped and Coo[per was in front of me. I ran. I ran really fast.
By Ryan
The hurdles were very big.
by Jonty
Clap! I was running to the finish line.
by Grace
I was scared because the parents were shouting loudly.
by Yuffie
When Mrs Barber clapped I ran to the end and I came first. It was lots of fun. My Mum cheered for me. I felt happy.
by Bridget
Clap! Mrs Barber let the race go. I went fast. I felt happy.
by Ben
When I jumped over the hurdles I came first and all the children were cheering for the children running. My heart was beating fast as I jumped over the hurdles and I tried hard.
by Kaea
I went to ran to the finish line. Everyone was in front of me but I was happy.
by Tilly
I came first in the running race. It was fun.
by Olaf
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